Wanted: character development

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Avyra
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Wanted: character development

Post by Avyra » November 24th, 2016, 7:39 pm

Av is in a slump. I'm killing her off at the end of the year if she can't get out of it; she really won't be that missed.

But I can't seem to get her out of it. I'm frankly the worst writer here and I can't write anything character wise that's interesting for people to read or creative or engaging or anything. Her issues are beyond my level. I've made a disliked and hard to play with character.

I want threads that could maybe boost her self esteem. Something that's an actual plot thread, not just a pep talk.

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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Locke » November 24th, 2016, 7:40 pm

well you've got Terric for stuff if you need
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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Leala » November 24th, 2016, 7:41 pm

Maybe she could help Abby out with a problem? We've been meaning to write a thread with Av and Torianin, anyway. :)
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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Avyra » November 24th, 2016, 7:41 pm

I'm not sure if fluff would be the best for her. All of her threads right now are pretty fluffy anyway.

Possibly, pm me any ideas.

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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Jenn » November 24th, 2016, 7:44 pm

Zeen would be very sad if she died. I'm working on replies!
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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Sunny » November 24th, 2016, 7:45 pm

I don't think I understand your definition of fluff. If you explained what you think is fluff versus what is "real" perhaps people can help more.
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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Avyra » November 24th, 2016, 7:51 pm

For me fluff is like... this thread is kinda here but it doesn't progress her storyline.

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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Jenn » November 24th, 2016, 7:55 pm

*tilts head* But if you're not sure where Av is going with the threads she's involved in, how do you know that it won't end up advancing/becoming important/being plain fun for her storyline?
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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Leala » November 24th, 2016, 7:57 pm

What goals do you have in mind for her, character/personality wise? (Trying to think of ideas)
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Re: Wanted: character development

Post by Avyra » November 24th, 2016, 8:16 pm

I don't know. I'm just tired.

I want her to go back to herself when she began. Heck, even better. I just need her out of this.

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